26 May 2008 @ 03:44 pm
Poetry  
Another one of my hobbies... writting poetry(which i'm not good at).

Chaos

I’m tired of being here,
Stick to the deam routine,
Stick to the complex roles,
Tight to the incomprehensible,
Lying in the cruel reality,
Just waiting.

Tears start coming down,
Thoughts are so tangled,
Eyes are so exhausted
Of being open,
Feet are too fagged
Of walking this path.

Skin aches so hard
of not being touched,
Hands are empty,
Heart is wounded,
Knees can’t stay
Stand by themselves.

Mind is in distress,
Fingers can’t identify their home,
Stomach lacks of flutters,
Lips are unsatisfied,
Kisses have no target,
Loneliness took me over.

Madness is my everyday,
Moon is my daily company,
Dreams are my saviours,
Days are a vicious curse,
Silence is my only speech,
The shell is about to burst.
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( 3 comments — Post a new comment )
May[info]mayalex_chan on June 8th, 2008 11:25 pm (UTC)
Hi there!
Que hermosa poesia, es bellisima, tan real....

No se que decirte, solo que es hermosa y que a veces entiendo lo que sentis,

^_^ I hope one day you'll find a man that will make these verses disappear.
Agostina[info]wingedreams on June 9th, 2008 06:21 pm (UTC)
Re: Hi there!
it was one of those lacking moments when i'm inspired haha... thanks for your opinion, you know it really matters to me.
see ya in your LJ.
May[info]mayalex_chan on July 9th, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Hey hun!

I wanted to formally invite you (again) to one of our forums. Thsi time it's specially designed for writters, and since you are an awesome writter, I wanted to invite you.

PLeaaaaaaaaaaaaase!!!

It doesn't matter if you write in english, it's still allowed...

Here´s the link

http://wushu.foros.ws/

I love you, take care!!!